Passion prepares a bountiful feast,
piercing the flesh of sacrificial beast.
Sinner falters, stumbles, then falls
towards bounty’s sweet siren call.
But is this of heaven or trickery of one
who tempts the naïve, for souls to be won?
Ah, but morsels so sweet, and savory too,
can only be found in love of You.
29 comments:
nice...sometimes it can be hard to tell "who it is of" but the living water fills...
great 55. mine is up!
Awesome job, as usual. I'm beginning to think you should write a book...any plans?
so well done....sometimes it is so hard to tell the difference
it is amazingly beautiful!
cool 55.
Happy Friday!
5th Sister...?
Man, did you ever Rock Out another 55!!
Thank You so much for your beautifully inspirational contribution.
And have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Plenty of food for thought there, and great conclusion. Only in Him can we find true wholeness and satisfaction.
My 55 is Twisting Roots
Very inspirational, and worded so well. Great 55.
Great 55!
I’m up right HERE
Ah, but is it love? There's always that question if there's no commitment.
I love it.. passiion is always a beast
My 55 is up
Inspired and amazing, that one. The discerning heart knows.
This is so rhythmic!! Love it.
This is my 55 this week!
[if you decide to stop by, scroll down below my Show n tell, as always, to find my FF55]
Have a glorious weekend.
Very nice. Amazing 55, always HE knows best! You take care of yourself.hugs,shakira
A very savory 55. It made me feel like making a snack!
A beautiful flash-back, and flash-forward for the soul!
I love the way you put this together and the story you're telling as well.
Lovely!
very nice!
love the ending.
The first couplet hits me where I live. Nice one.
You have a beautiful gift.
I know this may be an inappropriate response to something written so beautifully, but as an old Buzzard, would you mind giving me the phone number of the Siren that called?
Sorry about that, I'm a life long sinner in a slow recovery.
My 55: Respect
Beautifully creative homage. My 55 is HERE .
God does inspire a great passion.
i love the end! wonderful 55!
~IS
My 55 http://5thsister.blogspot.com/2010/03/flash-friday-55-passions-call.html
Beautiful, flowing, and very well said!!!
Dramatic and well put together. you really should write a book of some sort...you are so good at all these! Creative.
This is really beautiful. Good job.
http://pattiken-pattiken.blogspot.com/2010/03/friday-flash-55_26.html
Beautiful! and loved the last two lines!
Betty xx
Very nice work, very well done :)
Marinela
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