Friday, March 19, 2010

Flash Friday 55: Love Letter #1


I was serious,
always serious,

...until I met you.

You were silly,
truly quite silly.

...witty and so charming.

Laughter,
infectious laughter,

....casting light onto darkness,
smothering darkness,

...gathered in shadows.

Tenderness,
gentle tenderness,

...filling me with love,
immense love;

...taking me along life's journey,
an adventurous journey


...that I would do all over again.





I am participating in Flash Friday 55. This weekly meme is brought to you by G-Man over at Mr. Know it All. The object is to write a story or prose in exactly 55 words. Come join us and link your 55 over in Mr. Know it All's comment section.

24 comments:

Thom said...

How tender and sweet this is. I love it. And to do it all over again...AWESOME!! Well done my friend :) Have a great Friday :)

Brian Miller said...

yeah i would do it all over again too just to experience the adventure...great 55.

Peter Stone said...

Awww, you melted my heart with that one. There's something so special about infectious laughter and gentleness.

My 55 is Everything I Lack

Chef Kar said...

The best part is knowing you would do it all over again. Sweet and tender.


I'm up after a few weeks off:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Pride

Pelican Joe said...

Who is this silly person? I know you can't be referring to Mr. Sister! He is SOOO serious ALL the time!

Julie Schuler said...

I wouldn't want to be with someone who couldn't crack me up! Fab 55.

Anonymous said...

Genial post and this mail helped me alot in my college assignement. Thanks you seeking your information.

Hootin' Anni said...

Ya me too...I love fairy tale endings like this!!! I live one myself...with my DH for over 41 years.

Here's mine Take Pleasure - 101

Have a super terrific weekend.

Enchanted Oak said...

You are so blessed. So am I. It was lonely out there in the darkness. Now I know laughter, like you. My 55 is Here

Mumsy said...

Beautifully described and a great tribute to that mystery man!

Steven Anthony said...

what a beautiful tribute to that mystery of love...

thamesarino said...

your writing lately has been so personal... like little windows into your heart and soul.
You are very talented truly! What a great way to be able to express yourself! : )
happy weekend to you!

Tattoos and Teething Rings said...

Oh Polly, how beautiful! I am so amazed at your ability to open up and the creative way you share yourself :)

Alice Audrey said...

What a wonderful love. Kind of reminds me of my own marriage. :)

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

It is like an unsung love song, Polly, such tenderness. I like the way you are able to love so calming and deeply , so true that it embraces you.

You are improving , tremendously , in your creations. Like hidden rare gems rediscovered within you. Such gift. Such joy for me to read and for you to cultivate.

Have you a great weekend, dear.

It is the Weekend, TGIF! Weekend Funnies #2, Friday to Sunday (19th to 21st March,2010) is on. Please kindly click FuNNiES#2 to join us? Keep the FUNNIES in your weekends! hugs, shakira FACEBOOK

SPEAKING FROM THE CRIB said...

this was so sweet polly!

Nessa said...

A beautiful 55 word love letter.

Flash 55 - Help?

Monkey Man said...

This is so sweet. Very nice. My 55 is HERE.

Midday Escapades said...

I agree. So tender and sweet. A lovely love letter. Happy Friday Polly!

AJ said...

I've done a few 55 flash fridays! :) I love this one!

Buzzard said...

Laughter a wonderful way to a woman's heart!

My 55: My Invisibility

Betty Manousos:cutand-dry.blogspot.com said...

That was beautiful! I find it quite difficult to make a poem using only 55 words.!
Betty xx

Brian Miller said...

digging the new header...

PattiKen said...

Silliness is great. It brings sunshine into the gloom just when it's needed.

My 55 is up here.

LinkWithin

Related Posts with Thumbnails