Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Just Write: Tantrum


Temper builds 
deep within 
unknown place 
breaking chains 
releasing  
with rage 
resentment 
uncontrolled fury

“where in the hell 
did that come from?”

too late to 
reign control 
now cleaning 
sweeping 
sanitizing 
mess from 
aftermath 
of petulant storm

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13 comments:

Brian Miller said...

where does it come from at times..i can relate...

J. Kwiatkowski-Schuler said...

Hide the baseball bats.

Cheryl said...

Right in my gut. Nice.

Molly said...

Oh dear, yes. We're on the same wave length today.

Monkey Man said...

Who hasn't gone there. Good one.

Jannie Funster said...

I have too many "where the hell did that come from" moments." I am SO not perfect, but do have some moments of lucidity. :)

Very honest, loved this!

xo

Willoughby said...

Sometimes you can't help it, you just have to be mad about something.

Jenny said...

Sometimes storms are necessary.

They don't always have to make sense.

Stormy defragmenting is often required from overfull emotions.

That's my story.

And I'm stickin' to it.

Judie said...

Polly, we know all too well where it comes from, don't we!

Cynthia@RunningWithLetters said...

So..it's no just me, after all :)

Jenn Erickson said...

Beautifully articulated, Polly!

Joanna Jenkins said...

Oh, I can so relate to that. Great job.
xo jj

Betty Manousos@ Cut and Dry said...

love it! who hasn't gone there!

happy weekend!

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