The neatly wrapped packages,
where her memories are stored,
are begging to be noticed, to be heard.
They were boxed up; locked away so very long ago.
It is time and she's afraid.
She does not recall where she buried the keys.
But the memories...impatient, persistent, insistent...
tear their way through carefully tied bows.
I am participating in this meme hosted by G-Man over at Mr. Know It All. Have a peek and check out all of the other entries. There are some terrific writers out there. You won't be disappointed.
28 comments:
Lovely. I feel the pressure of the past.
Inspiration
nice. really like this one. a good mix, she was ready to open them, they were ready to get out...nice 55.
Well written. Underlying anxiety laced with some anticipation.
I definitely felt that one. Very nice.
The poem makes me have that feeling I get when I'm so anxious to tell someone something that I can't even hear what they are saying!
What a wonderful to describe memories.
I know exactly how that feels,
the expectations
and having to finally face it.
Deal with it.
Have you a great weekend.
hugs
shakira
Nice one. Well written. The memories were ready to come out.
Have a great day!:)
Well done you can feel the emotion in this one. I liked this :) Have a great Friday :)
The pressure to let it out busted, and free! Beautifully written and expressed..
a beautiful sentiment for memories...have a wonderful weekend!
Your poetry is so wonderful. When will you be publishing a collection of your works??
That was great to read. I like the meter and imagery.
Count yourself among the terrific writers!
Those boxes full of memories... can't keep 'em in storage forever. Well said.
Are they good memories or bad? Do they wish released to harm her or so she can heal? Of course even she cannot answer these questions, which is why she tries to keep the memories tightly bound .....
As you can see, your 55 touched a cord with e. Thanks for sharing.
Looks like there is a terrific writer in here, also!
Lovely. Memories are powerful reminders of where one has been, something can be difficult to expose to the light of today.
POLLY!!!
What a terrific 55 My Dear.
One of today's best so far!
You are a very talented addition to the Friday Funfest.
Please join us again next Friday..
PLEASE????
Have a Kick Ass Week-End..G-Daddy
First time I ever seen this name in galens comment box welcome aboard and glad to see you partcipating in our Flash 55 memeyou'll find it's fun and you'll find it's addicting also again welcome hope to see you more often you alia's reminds me of my fifthsister that's funny in it's own way I have always called her this when writting letters or birthday cards or Christmas Cards too she'll always be my fifthsister. I'mposted and ready to be readjust follow the link provided below.
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Thanks Again
Larry.
Welcome to 55, and well done.
You always impress me, but that good with 55 words...wow!
memories are such, they keep comming back
Beautiful words! Happy SITS Saturday Sharefest!
Polly, I will be right here as you go through this. Supporting you, crying with you, helping you find the keys. It is a very scary for sure, but once the gate is lifted, things will start to look better.
xo, MJ
Polly, you 're such a wonderful writer!
Bxx
I wrote a post last week that wasn't up for long b/c I deleted it. It was kinda raw and alluded to similar subjects. There was a line that talked about the heaviness of a hundred years. I can relate to the drudging up of memories, the past, things that have haunted us....
I hope you are saving all these and compiling them for a book!
Those memories won't stay boxed up forever.
Very nice!
xoxo
Those memories won't stay boxed up forever.
Very nice!
xoxo
Nice poetic 55 words today.
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