Started by Jenn at You Know...That Blog?
To start your haiku you need to know the basics.
At it's very core haiku is simply 3 non-rhyming lines
of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.
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This week's theme: Spontaneity
Next week's theme: Parent(s/ing)
Spontaneity!
Been waiting for this all week!
But I'm not prepared.
What to write about?
How to be spontaneous?
Hence it wouldn't be.
A vision came thus.
The best diversion of all!
Marital "whimsy"!
Please enjoy my prose.
Unconventional for me.
Hubby will be pleased! : )
"Loving Embrace - Magnolia Blooms"
Painting by Heather Hurzel
www.hurzelercreations.com
A quick, furtive glance;
Stolen kisses from true love;
Igniting passion.
25 comments:
Oooo! I am the first commenter! Yay me. My ittle one had a fever last night...no sleep for me! She seems better this am, thanks to lots of prayers! Have a great Wednesday!
Spontaneity
you leave caution to the wind
no plans, just plain fun
I love those, and I really love that painting!!
There, I commentted!
I wrote my thoughts on your wall.
Is this what you want?
spontaneity
what happens next? I don't know.
I hate surprises.
more like a "hot flash" :)
awesome!
You are really good at this! Loved these!!!
Yeah, I got nothin'
Hard to be spontaneous
Should have planned for this
Great haiku, I love the painting, very neat! :)
Wow, above and beyond this time! Awesome haiku!!
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm thinking you like to haiku...
Polly, whats with all your friends writing you haiku comments but NOT PARTICIPATING in our fun group? Are they closet haiku-ers, afraid to come out? Are they CHICKEN? I think you need to challenge them to participate. Call them names if you need to. ;)
I love when you do these!
ANother Haiku Wednesday, I love them.
Today Haiku, very pretty
Love it, Polly! Especially the last one -- hubba hubba!
I can only be spontaneous when I've had some time to think about it!
I love the art! I love spontaneity, too...it's kind of like a creed I live by--I don't like feeling locked in to much of anything!
you are so cute! i've missed you and i am glad u r back at the crib!
LOL...I love all of these :) Well done my friend. :)
A Haiku like this...
I cannot even compare.
I'm an amateur!
These are great! I am in awe of your writing powers!!!
Very creative your second set has lots of wit!
Yeah -- planning to be spontaneous somehow never quite works ...
Loved your verse(s).
Oooh la la! Good ones! (Like thea painting, too.) Have you ever thought about putting your haikus together for a book? You have a real gift for doing them.
marital whimsy -- I like that phrase. could use more of it in my life, too.
Great job!!!!!
I wish I could be more Spontaneous.
xo
I don't know how you do these things. You've either been doing Haiku forever or spend all week on them.
Been gone a few days.
But I'm back and checking in.
Writing a quick note.
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