Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Haiku Wednesday: Spontaneity

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Started by Jenn at You Know...That Blog?
To start your haiku you need to know the basics. 
At it's very core haiku is simply 3 non-rhyming lines
of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively. 
Come Join the fun.


This week's theme: Spontaneity
Next week's theme: Parent(s/ing)




Spontaneity! 
Been waiting for this all week!
But I'm not prepared.


What to write about?
How to be spontaneous?
Hence it wouldn't be.


A vision came thus.
The best diversion of all!
Marital "whimsy"!


Please enjoy my prose.
Unconventional for me.
Hubby will be pleased! : )


"Loving Embrace - Magnolia Blooms"
Painting by Heather Hurzel
www.hurzelercreations.com

A quick, furtive glance;
Stolen kisses from true love;
Igniting passion.

25 comments:

the domestic mama said...

Oooo! I am the first commenter! Yay me. My ittle one had a fever last night...no sleep for me! She seems better this am, thanks to lots of prayers! Have a great Wednesday!

Purple Flowers said...

Spontaneity
you leave caution to the wind
no plans, just plain fun

Lee the Hot Flash Queen said...

I love those, and I really love that painting!!

Pelican Joe said...

There, I commentted!
I wrote my thoughts on your wall.
Is this what you want?

Julie Schuler said...

spontaneity
what happens next? I don't know.
I hate surprises.

LarryG said...

more like a "hot flash" :)
awesome!

Tammy Howard said...

You are really good at this! Loved these!!!

***Holly*** said...

Yeah, I got nothin'
Hard to be spontaneous
Should have planned for this

Lissaloo said...

Great haiku, I love the painting, very neat! :)

Jenn@ You know... that blog? said...

Wow, above and beyond this time! Awesome haiku!!

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm thinking you like to haiku...

Polly, whats with all your friends writing you haiku comments but NOT PARTICIPATING in our fun group? Are they closet haiku-ers, afraid to come out? Are they CHICKEN? I think you need to challenge them to participate. Call them names if you need to. ;)

Tattoos and Teething Rings said...

I love when you do these!

Ms Bibi said...

ANother Haiku Wednesday, I love them.

Today Haiku, very pretty

Liz in Virginia said...

Love it, Polly! Especially the last one -- hubba hubba!

Willoughby said...

I can only be spontaneous when I've had some time to think about it!

Cynthia@RunningWithLetters said...

I love the art! I love spontaneity, too...it's kind of like a creed I live by--I don't like feeling locked in to much of anything!

SPEAKING FROM THE CRIB said...

you are so cute! i've missed you and i am glad u r back at the crib!

Thom said...

LOL...I love all of these :) Well done my friend. :)

Chanda @ The Eco-Cheap Mom said...

A Haiku like this...
I cannot even compare.
I'm an amateur!

Raoulysgirl said...

These are great! I am in awe of your writing powers!!!

mooreboglife said...

Very creative your second set has lots of wit!

quilly said...

Yeah -- planning to be spontaneous somehow never quite works ...

Loved your verse(s).

kys said...

Oooh la la! Good ones! (Like thea painting, too.) Have you ever thought about putting your haikus together for a book? You have a real gift for doing them.

phd in yogurtry said...

marital whimsy -- I like that phrase. could use more of it in my life, too.

Joanna Jenkins said...

Great job!!!!!
I wish I could be more Spontaneous.
xo

Weezer said...

I don't know how you do these things. You've either been doing Haiku forever or spend all week on them.

Been gone a few days.
But I'm back and checking in.
Writing a quick note.

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