Driving on foreign land
rescuer at my side
rounding a bend
stunned to see
the giant with a dagger
realizing only then
my passenger
was no hero
rather
villain instead
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I enjoy participating in this weekly meme, where one must write a prose, a story, in EXACTLY 160 characters (spaces included). I am finding that this format works perfectly with my dreams. Please be sure to visit Monkey Man and read other entries.
10 comments:
hello..coming by to visit..
I was married to that villainness(only briefly, thank goodness) - exemplary, perfect.
If this was a Sunday 180, how fun it might be to jump from the moving car.
yikes....not a good place to be in...people can be deceptive...
Yikes!
A twist at the end.. hunh?
Why wasn't he the Prince of Persia instead? wink
Love xox
Hope you managed to daggered the giant away.. :)
A twisted tale. I like. Thanks for palying along with the Sunday 160.
hope he does not read this.
beautiful plot,
well d0ne 160.
Rather creepy, but so true these days - you can't always judge a book by the cover!
Awesome twist! Once again, I wish it were longer. I know, 160 characters and spaces is the point, I just want more!
Uh ohh...scary to watch a hero turn to villain..
A great metaphor.. very well written!!
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