Sunday, March 20, 2011

Sunday 160: Dream #3 - The Drive

Driving on foreign land
rescuer at my side
rounding a bend
stunned to see
the giant with a dagger
realizing only then
my passenger
was no hero
rather 
villain instead


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I enjoy participating in this weekly meme, where one must write a prose, a story, in EXACTLY 160 characters (spaces included). I am finding that this format works perfectly with my dreams. Please be sure to visit Monkey Man and read other entries. 

10 comments:

reanaclaire said...

hello..coming by to visit..

Steve Isaak said...

I was married to that villainness(only briefly, thank goodness) - exemplary, perfect.

avoidtheclap said...

If this was a Sunday 180, how fun it might be to jump from the moving car.

Brian Miller said...

yikes....not a good place to be in...people can be deceptive...

Olivia said...

Yikes!
A twist at the end.. hunh?

Why wasn't he the Prince of Persia instead? wink

Love xox
Hope you managed to daggered the giant away.. :)

Monkey Man said...

A twisted tale. I like. Thanks for palying along with the Sunday 160.

Jingle said...

hope he does not read this.

beautiful plot,
well d0ne 160.

Pheromone Girl said...

Rather creepy, but so true these days - you can't always judge a book by the cover!

Willoughby said...

Awesome twist! Once again, I wish it were longer. I know, 160 characters and spaces is the point, I just want more!

kavisionz said...

Uh ohh...scary to watch a hero turn to villain..
A great metaphor.. very well written!!

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