exposing heart
imbibing
love’s elixir
extinguishing thirst…
becoming
unexpectedly intoxicated
with
exquisite desire…
extending hand,
transfixed by touch,
exploring,
exhuming…
extracting,
exposing
long exiled
emotions…
breath catches,
excitement builds
coaxing
explosive passion…
detoxing in matrix
of exceptional love;
exhausted,
flummoxed…
without words
to express,
to examine
the inexplicable…
this complex
existence
caught within
paradoxical vortex.
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32 comments:
so many x's in this read, feels so x-rated. Need a glass of cold water now. Loved it.
Masterful!
=)
Remember Sesame Street?
This post was brought to you by the letter "X"
I am not worthy to be in the same blogsphere with you! You bring vivid images to my mind with so few words...AND you used one of my favorite words (flummoxed). I feel like I'm in kindergarden.
You have a true gift!
wow....graet flow...which plays well with such passion....
i need some of this in my life!
and thank you so much for your sweet comment. :)
X2! what she said ^^^^
Impressive - talk about building up to a crescendo with words...
Well done!
Ahhh, and the Ravelo plays in the blogosphere. :)
Always really liked that word "Flummoxed."
xxx
and
and two o's
Extremely wonderful, and intoxicating poem, Polly!
exceptional allitration!
Sexy stuff.
what a spring rain
of words....
full of fun
and they tickle...
Happy Friday.
Xcellent 55.
Pollyanna....
Thats why you have 5 children, you are so passionate!!
Loved your 69 er 55!!
Sensual and Adult.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
What a great X poem!
Teresa
I love a good vortex...
This is definitely x-rated and exciting poetry.
Mine 55 is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/03/friday-flash-55-rest-in-peace-elizabeth.html#links
It was EXQUISITE!
All I can say is, Holy Crap, darling.
Bloody Hand
My! That is quite and sexy 55. Very creative.
a masterful vortex of words and emotions. Scintillating!
Wow! I love your poetry and the letter "X" had an outstanding role! Thanks for sharing...awesome!
Polly, I love the "paradoxical vortex" in this poem. Great work!!
Excellent work, love the word pairings.
Having issue with your X? Nicely done.
Sexy!
I love the look of this poem on the page...slink and sexy.
Wow!! So beautiful!
Wonderful! And you left me breathless with excitement. :))
Ooh la la - cold water needed after that!
Sorry taken so long to comment had cold all week and not been on PC much
loved it super amount of X's
If I had never read your work before I would be astounded at your word mastery.
And...
Oddly...
Having read your work before I AM STILL ASTOUNDED!
You are the master.
A+ plus my apologies for my late visit this week.
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