Sunday, October 17, 2010

Sunday 160: Tears

(Image courtesy of http://www.allthepages.org/)

Silent tears emerge and flow
upon the banks
of the Smoky Hill River  
when she suddenly realizes
 this is the very first time
she has ever known
and truly felt love

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To participate or read other samples of this new genre of fiction, 
please visit Monkey ManThe idea behind Sunday 160 
is to write a short piece in exactly160 characters, 
spaces included. 

17 comments:

Brian Miller said...

my heart breaks for her...nice 160 polly.

my 160

Susannah said...

That is beautiful! A wonderful 160. :-)

Cheryl said...

True love beautifully illustrated and written. Great 160.

Mine's here.

Claudia said...

ah - what a nice place for an experience like this..nice 160

PattiKen said...

I hope they are tears of joy. Of course, places like that often bring tears to my eyes for no other reason than being stunned by their beauty.

Alice Audrey said...

So sad to only realize it when it isn't fun.

Judie said...

HOw did you produce such deep feeling in 160 characters? It really took some though. Bravo, Polly!

Steven Anthony said...

realization of love...both sad and joyful....brilliant my friend ;)

Willoughby said...

It never ceases to amaze me how much you can say with so few words. Beautiful!

Monkey Man said...

Tears of joy are a good thing and so is this Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

CIMPOACA LAURENTIU said...

nice photo

gayle said...

Beautiful!! Loved it!!

Tina said...

Seems like your journey continues to be successful! This was just lovely, Polly. {{{hugs}}}

Caty said...

simply beautiful :)

Su-sieee! Mac said...

I hope these were not tears for unrequited love or love that has split art. Such smokiness to your words.
Su-sieee! Mac
This and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.

gautami tripathy said...

So beautiful a verse..

totality

gautami tripathy said...

So beautiful a verse..

totality

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