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Silent tears emerge and flow
upon the banks
of the Smoky Hill River
when she suddenly realizes
this is the very first time
she has ever known
and truly felt love
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To participate or read other samples of this new genre of fiction,
please visit Monkey Man. The idea behind Sunday 160
is to write a short piece in exactly160 characters,
spaces included.
16 comments:
my heart breaks for her...nice 160 polly.
my 160
That is beautiful! A wonderful 160. :-)
True love beautifully illustrated and written. Great 160.
Mine's here.
ah - what a nice place for an experience like this..nice 160
I hope they are tears of joy. Of course, places like that often bring tears to my eyes for no other reason than being stunned by their beauty.
So sad to only realize it when it isn't fun.
HOw did you produce such deep feeling in 160 characters? It really took some though. Bravo, Polly!
realization of love...both sad and joyful....brilliant my friend ;)
It never ceases to amaze me how much you can say with so few words. Beautiful!
Tears of joy are a good thing and so is this Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.
Beautiful!! Loved it!!
Seems like your journey continues to be successful! This was just lovely, Polly. {{{hugs}}}
simply beautiful :)
I hope these were not tears for unrequited love or love that has split art. Such smokiness to your words.
Su-sieee! Mac
This and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.
So beautiful a verse..
totality
So beautiful a verse..
totality
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