In the depths of her despair
she went beyond
what most tortured souls do
building a physical wall
to represent the emotional
one within her soul
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Microfiction Monday is a weekly meme where you design a story, in 140 characters or less, around a specific picture. For more information on Microfiction Monday, and to read other stories, please visit Susan over at Stony River.
24 comments:
Wow, wow, wow.
Nicely done.
Great poetry for that picture.
My friend across the pond really got me into the Pre-Raphaelites. That's a great painting, and a very suitable poem.
Oooo. Deep. I like that!
Terrific take on the pic! Hope you have a great week!
Sylvia
Nice to meet you Polly.
Loved the emotion in your story.
Very well done.
Had fun loking through your blog. a nice assortment and exchange of ideas.
wow. that is painful...
you do more with just a few words than most could with an entire book.
Lovely, as usual, my friend!
Beautiful!
You're crazy talented, Polly. :)
B xx
Very sad and dark. :O( Good take.
That was very good. I enjoyed it!
Very very good. Who would have thought she'd order it done herself?
Kay, Alberta
Yours is a one-of-a-kind for this week's picture--the maiden is having the wall-building done herself to portray her psychological imprisonment. Excellent!
At least she had the forethought to keep some useful tools with her in case she ever changes her mind about being bricked in!
Have a great week. Cheers!
Ah, very poetic. And wonderful message, too. :)
Oh, I like this one-very deep.
Deep, and very nicely done. :-)
I like this interpretation! Here's mine: A woman's Lot
This woman has been through a lot this week! :)
Way too realistic
gotta psycho- analyze that princess
Moonie smiles
Terrific! Talk about symbols.
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