Six months ago
I held your hand
as you cried,
tearfully pleading
for a gun
so that you
could take your life
for your pain was
unbearable
Last week
I held your hand
as you cried,
accepting fate…
an example
of courage
faith and strength
Today
God holds my hand
as I cry…
asking why
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15 comments:
Pollyanna..?
What a fantastic piece of writing!
Very Emotional, very sad.
Loved your 55.
You blew this one right out of the water!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
So beautifully written.
So heartbreakingly sad.
that question always comes first, does it ever go away? beautiful and honest write
def emotive ...does make me want to know more...i am glad they turned from suicide...but the second part leaves me wondering...
I really hope that's fiction. Because if you (or someone you know) has been through that you have my deepest sympathy. Excellent writing.
Beautifully written. I hope it was a work of fiction and not something you are currently dealing with.
Great job, just right! thanks.
I hope this is fiction too. If it's not, my heart bleeds for you and your loved ones.
a wonderfully written heartbreaking story.
Wow, what a hard-core poem. Very well done.
- Alice
Sincere, sad, and moving 55.
Poignant and sad.
Very powerful.
love the way you tell the story.
beautiful flow.
it could be real,blessings.
Effective, emotional writing.
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