Ed was excited
to be participating
in the tribe’s annual ritual:
Little did he know
that it was his head,
not apples,
they’d be bobbing for.
(140)
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Micro-fiction Muse involves writing a very short story (140 characters max-including spaces) based upon a photo prompt. I make it my goal to always use140 characters exactly. Diane Estrella is our host for this weekly meme. Please be sure to visit her blog for complete rules and to visit other participants.
8 comments:
uh oh...gotta love immersing yourself in a culture...
So perfect I can not even express it enough!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!! :O)
You can't underestimate the value of a good interpreter (or at least a cheap translation guide)!
Ha...I loved this, Polly! And your friend Willoughby's response was perfect...:)
Oh my poor son. But seriously, I laughed.
Bummer for him.
Oh my goodness!! Well done! Love it!
Two words: LOVE IT! And more words: Made me laugh out loud!
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