Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday: Deception

secrets burrowing…
mind deaf to truth’s silent shouts…
memories altered

secrets burrowing…
beguiling, bewitching, bold
binding battered soul

secrets burrowing…
sneaky,  sleazy,  nesting near
Ever present threat

Soul’s awakening...
divine intervention lifts
fog from hazy mind

soul’s awakening...
seeking vision’s clarity
to lies’ deception

soul’s  awakening...
breaking free from captive’s chains
one link at a time


Sensational Haiku Wednesday

14 comments:

Brian Miller said...

keep waking that soul...its really a daily decision it seems...at least for me...

Margo Benson said...

Great haiku - I love all the mystery.

Someone Is Special said...

Deception at its best.. Soul's awakening, I Loved it.. Nice Haikus..

Someone is Special

Ms Bibi said...

Very intriguing...great Haiku

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Love the alliteration and general flow of words. Mysterious, creepy at times, and ultimately hopeful and free. Great job!

TortugaRachel said...

That was beautiful! Thank you so much!!

Tina said...

Another masterpiece from a masterful writer. LOVE how the first lines echoes, and the contrast between the two sets. Really powerful stuff.

Cheryl said...

Great imagery and rhythm. Really nice write, Polly.

Willoughby said...

You remain the Haiku Queen! I never cared much for Haiku in the past because it always seemed to be such an abstract form of expression, often lacking feeling. You've changed my thinking because you bring such emotion to your lovely creations.

blueviolet said...

Yes, bit by bit we are freed.

samurai said...

I enjoyed these poems today. 8) Thank you for sharing. 8)

Becca said...

Wow, I am impressed with the number of haikus you managed to write! :)

Nessa said...

Beautifully written. Secrets are the silent killers of the soul.

Madeleine said...

Great haiku thread. Sorry I missed this on Weds, I had a bad back :O)

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