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Do I Scare You…
she seemed to whisper
into his mind
as he stole a glance
her way
looked away
God, yes
he thought,
terrified he was
when their eyes met
So many “whys”,
“what ifs”,
catching him off guard.
Questions fade,
fears eased,
releasing tethers
strangling his heart,
when
she reached out to him…
I am participating in Flash Friday 55. This weekly meme is brought to you by G-Man over at Mr. Know it All. The object is to write a story or prose in exactly 55 words. Come join us and link your 55 over in Mr. Know it All's comment section.
20 comments:
Ooo la la, I like what you've done here!!!
Very nice. there is so much fear in some first meetings.
very well done my friend;)
This is a good one! Please tell me it will continue with next Friday's post!
Everytime I stop by here, I find something beautiful. Great job! Have a happy Easter!
The emotion here is really thrilling - good one!
Mine is here if you'd like to read.
I'm intrigued! Nice job...Happy Easter!! :)
beautiful 55...i hope you and yours have a wonderful easter!
my 55 is up!
Polly, what a wonderful idea for a meme and perfect for your talent. I always enjoy reading your poetry and prose. This is fabulous 55! I look forward to more in the future.
That is very well done and written my friend. Excellent. I hope you and your family have a wonderful Easter :)
That was just such an uplifting 55! It is full of hope.
well done,
love the way the poem flow.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/02/55-single-dad/
here is mine!
Polly...
I always look foreward to your posts on Friday.
You Rock It baby!
Excellent 55 as usual.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Happy Easter, and a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Love it!
I hope not to lose followers when I transition over to WP. I hope that I can still be seen in everyone's Google Reader. There's a glitch they are trying to work out with that. We'll know soon enough! Lol!
And, sorry I didn't get back to you about the radio show, I'm actually about to post a recap now of last weeks show.
You can listen to it at http://www.whenthedivastalk.com
Your writing is always heartstopping. Incredible....
Great story. Love the feel. My 55 is HERE.
It's so hard to remember what it was like, to meet someone so tentatively. Nice capture of the moment.
Redheads have that effect on me.
One of my favorites!!!
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