Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Sensational Haiku Wednesday-Dance

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Will you dance with me
while I am young and naive,
just learning the steps?


Would you dance with me
as I mature, changing songs
and the rhythms too?


Could you dance with me
when I'm old, feeble, and gray
too weak to keep up?


Do not mourn my death
for the Lord of the Dance
now dances with me.


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16 comments:

Brian Miller said...

wonderful.
keep dancing for all eternity....

how you feeling?

Julie Schuler said...

I thought the Lord of The Dance was Michael Flatley. ;)

Mumsy said...

How beautiful! Just dance..

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Polly, YOU are SERIOUSLY EXCELLENT!
All my Haikus are stand alone, yours
makes a set of beautiful poem!
YOU ROCK , GIRL!
hugs
shakira

Willoughby said...

Very nice!

Tina said...

When my Grandma Vivian died on 2/25/10, what I said to my 10 year old was, "She's dancing with Jesus now." (Having been wheelchair bound for the last year, and having used a walker for 7 years before that.) In her prime years she was an amazing square dancer. Your haiku set really touched me.

Jenn@ You know... that blog? said...

Beautiful! The first one really set the tone; love it.

Excellent, as always!

L.B. said...

Brilliant!

Steven Anthony said...

just beautiful...just dance from now through eternity;)

Mama Zen said...

This is beautiful!

I'm a full-time mummy said...

Lovely! You are so good in haikus!

Thom said...

At least your still dancing. :) brilliant as usual. :)

Jazzbumpa said...

Beautifully done - and I'm old enough to appreciate it!

Cheers!
JzB

Jen said...

I feel like I'm still just learning the steps. Great job!

Les said...

Love the "Lord of the Dance" reference! Nicely done!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Ah, the dance will go on long after the dancers stop...

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