Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Haiku Wednesday

Join the fun!

Today's theme: TIME

Awake during night.
Tossing, turning. Craving sleep.
Drats! TIME to get up.

Dragging through the day
Hoping for TIME to take nap.
No such luck. Carpool.

DinnerTIME is near.
Oregano, garlic, THYME,
Pasta al dente.

Night approaches fast.
Bed's lure...intoxicating!
Relishing bedTIME.


This was fun! Everyone is invited to join in, just click on the "Haiku Wednesday" picture above and go the the "home" page. You will be directed to the fun and frivolity! Bonus points if your comments are in haiku form: 5 syllables first line, 7 syllables second line finishing with 5 syllables on the third line. Go ahead and try it...I dare you!

17 comments:

Willoughby said...

Dare me to Haiku?
There are bonus points at stake
Haiku to you too!

Melli said...

Ooooo! I LIKED this! Especially the play with time & thyme! :)

Raoulysgirl said...

Oh, Queen of Haiku
Of your wit I am in awe
Mine just won't compare

phd in yogurtry said...

Excellent job with the multi-verse haiku! Especially nailed it with thyme. Loved it.

Tattoos and Teething Rings said...

Me likes! I can't haiku right now, I'm braindead and sleep-deprived, but I will try later...I promise!

Holly said...

That's great...I can relate!
Holly @ 504 Main

Jenn@ You know... that blog? said...

Wow, a plethora of haiku! ;)

Very nice, I really enjoyed them all!

TMC said...

I know the feeling(s)! :) Great job!

kyslp said...

That was great! I have wanted to play along but I can't do haiku. (That was an unintentional, yet cheesey rhyme.) I never have been able to write them.

Deidra said...

Just returned from lunch.
A nap on a blue church couch.
Returned to this verse.

Well...that's me trying to haiku along with you. Obviously not my gift. But your poem is great!

LarryG said...

I love the way you transform this into a soliloquy!

Charisse and Holly said...

I suck at poetry! Enjoy reading yours though. Happy Wednesday...glad I stopped by. Holly at lifelaughlatte.blogspot.com

Thom said...

Thanks for stopping by my playground. I appreciate it. I love these...takes you through the entire day and night. Very clever and well done :)

quilly said...

I love how you passed the time of day. And you took Thyme to enjoy a savory meal. Perfect.

JadeLD said...

I love this post, it's excellent! The haiku's go really well together showing your day, how very creative - well done.

Lissaloo said...

Very Cute, I am poetically challenged :)

Amanda said...

You did a fantastic job with this, it is very cute.... moms never have "time" do they?

LinkWithin

Related Posts with Thumbnails