Wheels spinning
wildly out of control
digging deeper
ever deeper
into self made pit
of despair
Waving white cloth
surrendering
willingly
completely
to hidden truth
haphazardly evaded
until now
Gratefully grasping
knowing hands
reaching out
offering peace
handing out hope
pulling me back on track
Now trudging
road towards
destiny of
God’s will...
not mine
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20 comments:
Trudging a road of happy destiny. Where have I heard that before? Nice Flash Fiction 55.
My 55 is HERE .
Polly that is so apropos
so easy to get ourselves caught in the mire of life. God alone can dig us out
Moonie smiles
Friday Flash 55
But how can you be sure it's not simply a part of you calling you that way?
Polly...
Your 55 word contribution certainly can spur on great discourse.
Excellent job.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
glad you made it back to the right track polly...nice write
Love the last paragraph:
Now trudging
road towards
destiny of
God’s will...
not mine
Yes, God's will, not mine! Thanks for this reminder!
Yes, we all need a divine tow truck now and then.
Cool ! love the spinning wheels image- so true, like the rest of it, Thanks!
Keep on trucking! My 55
That's as real as it gets. Beautiful 55!
To be lifted when you've fallen...that's so lovely.
Wonderful 55.
My 55: escapee
Pulling up out of the mire, shaking oneself off and moving on.. That's life.
Nice 55.
Very insightful! Beautifully written, as always!
A very profound and thought provoking poem. Very well written. Ditto to g-man's comment that this poem stirs the imagination and makes for a wonderful discourse. Nicely done 55,
cheers,
joanny
I think I've been forgotten in the mire - or so it seems. Guess I have to wait my turn!
Excellent 55.
Mine is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/01/flash-55-friday-way-we-were-1-aloha.html#links
woo hoo! I am so glad that you are still here writing! I'm back again!
Great one! Thanks for the vulnerability!
Wow, what a ride! :) I really liked this.
Trudge is a good word and describes the process well. Steadily and usually laboriously. It ain't for the feint of heart.
Nice write, Polly.
Oh that's good! It's hard to let go and let God, but it's always the best choice. Of course, that doesn't stop me from sometimes wallowing in self-pity...
Great write! Great insight, Polly.
You're so gifted!
You're inspiring me.
B xx
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