Preoccupied with Pain
Poetically Portrayed...
She Patiently Processed
Its Potent Possessive Power
Penetrating the Psyche.
Penetrating the Psyche.
A Perplexing Predicament to Ponder.
Will she fall, as Passive Prey,
to Predatory Patriarchal Patterns of the Past?
to Predatory Patriarchal Patterns of the Past?
Or in Protest
Will she be Prompted to Probe
A Purposeful Path:
One of Prayer, Praising, Peace?
Paradise.
28 comments:
What an interesting meme! I love your poem, too. Great job with P, Miss Polly!
Polly, how do you do it? I think this may be my favorite one yet. Terrific!
I hope she picks prayer and peace. The poem is great.
i think she'll find the right one...smiles.
Prayer and peace. Perfect poem.
"Predatory Patriarchal Patterns of the Past"- plosive perfection!
I don't know you manage to do this every week, yet another perfect piece of prose! I think she will definitely choose the right path :) Kathy
I hope she protests ;-) and finds peace. Great job again.
Mmmm... the words are perfect and almost give a feel of darkness til the last stanza. I love the conclusion... paradise. What a wonderful poem. Thank you.
I also like the way the poem talks about itself... I'm not communicating well; but does that make sense?
Awesomeness is all I can say. The Purposeful Path really spoke to me. I sure would love to find my purpose!
WOW that was good! I could not come up with such a verse or poem....I am impressed! Happy P day!
Lovely and powerful.
Perfect poem as always!
love it...
Your P poem was awesome and meaningful, Polly. Love it!
These words confirm for one more time your great abillity in poetry!
Hope you're having a wonderful day!
B xx
Once again a perfect poem. I love them.
awesome poem
misss all ur posts
have a great day
Superb! You and your crafty use of language is nothing short of amazing...Peace and blessings
Poetic perfection. As always!
You have such a poetic nature and your poems are always so inspiring...thank you sharing your talent with us!
I love the ending: paradise.
Wonderful P post and poem. Blessings to you sweet lady!
PERFECT. Wonderful poem, Polly!
Another week of Polly's Perfect Poetry ... about Paradise.
You are going to do a little book about this at the end of the first Alphabe-Thursday round aren't you?
I will be in line to buy it!
Thanks for making this meme so fantastic!
Stopping here is always a wonder!
A+
You're a great poet, Polly! So many P words that conveying strong feelings too.
wowzers! how do you keep doing this ... i am so in awe of your talent ... beautiful, as always!
grrrr, pompous patriarchy! Get outta my path!
A purposeful path...I am looking for mine. Beautiful P!
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