"May I help you,miss? You look puzzled."
"Mmmm...thank you, I'm just looking for my father. We came in together a moment ago, but he seems to have wandered off."
"I do not think he has wandered off, for you were alone when you entered here."
"No, I'm quite sure he was with me."
"When was the last time you spoke with him or dined at his table?"
"Come to think of it, it has been some time."
"Are you certain it wasn't you that wandered far away?"
"What do you mean?"
"Remember when your path became rocky and unsure? When nightly tears became your lullaby?"
"But how....how do you know that?"
"My dear child, I am He."
I fall to my knees and tearfully pray: "Father! Please forgive me!"
17 comments:
Interesting way to take this...
Different than the others (o:
ah, i love it...glad you found Him...smiles.
so you back now?
He never strays does he....beautiful reminder my friend
Wow! Powerful!
Very spiritual take on this. I like it. Good job.
oh stink I got chills. That was simply amazing. Best so far (IMHO)
That was awesome!
Fabulous! Well done!
Such a powerful piece. Made me tingle! Brill!
A refreshing and very moving take on the prompt!
Wow, definitely very powerful. Great job with this!!
That was great! A very different "Father" indeed! :)
FABULOUS! I like this one! I wish I had read the prompt and had a chance to write on it before reading your writing... I would have liked to see which direction my brain would have gone... might have to participate in this one!! :)
Oh, you nailed this one! Great job making this one your own.
Holy criminy Polly.
You totally, completely and utterly used this prompt in a way I could not have imagined in 100 years!
Really excellent.
Really, really excellent.
Just lovely
What an unexpected use of this week's prompt. Beautifully written, I really love this. Kathy
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