fearing her secrets would soon be discovered
she worked diligently to hide bottles of wine
and private mementos from her past
along the roller coaster’s wild path
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I'm participating in Monkey Man's weekly meme
where the point is to write a piece
in exactly 160 characters (spaces included)
I am finding this is the perfect platform
to share bits and snippets of my dreams
as I walk my life's journey.
10 comments:
I told you those dreams would come in handy for your writing! No one has more interesting dreams than you do, my friend!
Great work!
Not to take away from your wonderful and quite thought-provoking 160, but I think I may have found the PERFECT IMAGE (<--Click!) to accompany your story.
All kidding aside, your meme contribution is great!
Isn't it ironic that the bottles of wine will both compel one to hide them, and make it hard.
smiles. that way you can play hide and seek when you need them...
I imagine two versions of her working "diligently": a subjective one, where she is impaired as she works, and an objective one, where maybe she is recovering from her ride on the roller coaster. I hope she's off the ride, but I suspect she is not.
Great work.
I imagine bottles and roller coasters don't mix! LOL
Great Sunday 160. Appreciate you posting even though you have to work. Thanks so much for playing along.
Great job!!
Nice, nice, nice.
Have a great week, jj
Thought provoking. Thank you.
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