temptation tickles,
taunts...
terminally teases
tentacles thrust forth,
tethers heart...
thy tourniquet squeezes
transfused...tender toxins
trickle, temper,
tamper self will
titillates,
intoxicates
with transient thrills
taken, entrapped,
thy tenacious grip,
though tight, enchants
tantalized, I tremble,
my testimony
to thy every glance
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19 comments:
I blame the vicodin for this, my first thought:
Tryst.
That tantalizing temptation.
Three times teased.
This time?
my testimony to thy glance....tight close...will say though my jr high mind grabs titilate and goes to places i dont need to ....ha
Tremendous!
=)
your teasing me I'm tellin ..... TEACHER!!!
Temptation - my favorite "T"
(After Mr. T, of course)
(Oh, and lapsang souchong!)
Terrific! I love this poem.
Terrific!
Teresa
So true. So true. It is so hard to run away from those sneaky tentacles.
Wonderful! Super poem!!
Please visit me, too.
Barb
p.s. I am your new follower.
I love this!~Ames
Ouch! Tentacles and Toxins! It's like H.P. Lovecraft wrote this to Cthulu!
Totally magnificent
Hi Polly,
Thanks for checking out my watercolor paintings!
Have a great day,
Barb
Did someone say Vicodin? Works for me!!
Polly, you've created another excellent poem. I am so jealous!!
This is difficult to do in poetry and have it came out so lyrical and profoundly beautiful. Bravo.
joanny
Wonderful poem!
I have to admit, I misread "tentacles" the first time through (blush).
What a terrific poem! I have to look up on some words :-)
Totally terrific t...?
I think I am not as good as you in writing a poem.
Happy weekend, dear Polly!
B xx
The vicodan comments totally made me laugh because I was just looking at the look to see if it was time for a pain pill for this dratted bone infection!
Love your poetry.
Love your writing.
Love your courage.
Love your terrific links to Alphabe-Thursday!
You are my hero.
Hugs and A+'s!
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