Insecurity the cause
Isolation the means
Insanity the result
Irrational excuses
Insidious disease
Inescapable grasp
Internal battle
Incapacitated will
Inevitable the injuries
Infidelity in
this worshipping
of false idols
discovered in dregs,
of indulgent, insatiable,
impulsive imbibing.
impulsive imbibing.
God’s insistent, indeed.
Incredibly forgiving.
He alone ignites the initiative...
insight, necessary to face those
inconvenient, important
truths.
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Flash Friday 55 is where you must compose a poem or short story in exactly 55 words. For more information on this meme, or to participate, please go visit G-Man at Mr. Know it All.
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34 comments:
Hi Polly, that was an amazing poem . you have some incredible I words in there and it all makes sense ! very interesting.
Wow! that's a lot of truth in I's!!
This is wonderful! I will be thinking about this for the rest of the day.
amazing! what a wonderful thursday post! thanks for sharing! blessings..s...
yes indeed...it becomes a way to numb the pain but also the heart...
That is amazingly beautiful. You have a great talent. Happy Alphabethursday!
Wow!!! Lots of "I"'s, LOL!
Very clever - great job!
:) Gina
http://ginahickman.blogspot.com
invaluable i poem.
insightful message in 55 words.
well done.
What an apt description of one caught in the grips of alcoholism.
My 55 is HERE .
Wow.!
That was just something! I read it twice, what a great piece!
Mine's up HERE
that was brilliant!!
Your fantastic Talent Polly-Anna Increases week by week!!
Loved your word play and 55.
You Rock The Ionosphere!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Incredible! I love this. Who would have thought so many I words worked for this topic. Ironically my Alphabe-Thursday is about wine. http://edenhills.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/intoxicating/
Here's my 55. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/mandt/
great use of all those I words
Sadly the insatiable thirst has pulled many into it's hold
very poetic and a strong message
thanks and happy weekend
moon smiles
I love the way you can make all of those words make sense and still flow smoothly.
Wow! this is beautifully written. And with so much meaning in such economy of words too !
You're just amazing with words! This is really wonderful and insightful "inevitable the injuries.."
The "if only's"
the insanity !
I like the way you put this together- good one, Thanks !
Wow, an Ipoem. The resolution is at the end if I have the "I's" to see it.
In the words of one of my favorite characters "Inconceivable!".
A serious problem you expressed beautifully.
Polly, this poem has much meaning for so many people today! Great post!
Intriguing indeed!
(I idolize it!)
feel like an "i" myself after reading this...lol...nice write and so true..
you are such a good poet! i have to re-read it!!!
magnificent, Polly! You are an amazing wordsmith!
Wooohooo!!! And you are simply incomparable!! And this poem - incredibly instructive in the learning of many I words! :)
I am indebted to you for this one!!
FABULOUS!!
So precise.
Wow. Amazing, powerful, personal. This is my favorite of yours now. Your talent is multiplying as I watch. It's a great ride! Keep up the good work on ALL fronts :-)
Blissfully escapable. Thankfully with help.
Beautifully written. From the depths of deepest darkness we all rise.
you never cease to amaze me with your talent.
I like that poem a lot! It speaks the truth!!
Hard truths all wrapped up in a package of words that flow together in harmony and accord.
This was amazing, Miss Sister.
Touching and profound and such a wonderful, wonderful stop on our little journey through Alphabe-Thursday's letter "I".
A++++++++++++
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