Hungering for a hint of hope
He falls upon his knees
Praying to his God above
“Hey You! A little help here, please.”
“I know I haven’t made the time
To have you in my life…
You think that is maybe why
It’s been filled with strife?”
“I come before you, humbly now,
Heart hardened by hurtful past
Honestly seeking heaven’s hand
From this hell to be cast.”
“I thank you, God, for hearing me
As I hunch before thy throne.
Ready to heed thy holy word
And dwell within thy home." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
25 comments:
the second stance was right on . Liked your poem .
Beautiful poem!
He's always listening, but hearing & listening to what is being said to us takes some work, doesn't it?!
been there more than once. nice poem
I think we can ALL relate to this one!
=)
Beautiful poem, Polly. Have a wonderful day! La
Beautiful poem. I think everyone has felt that way at one time or another.
Yep, there's certainly more then one way to miss out on Hope, and not listening is right up there on the top. Hope you'll visit my post on Hope too!
This poem is wonderful! Thanks for the reminder to hope and pray.
smiles. yep been there as well....
wonderful...
Lovely inspirational poem Polly!
Your writing is amazing! Thank you for sharing!
Happy H Day!
Coralie
I've been there a time or two...or more.
a poignant declaration...
a glorious collection of words that make us "feel"...
that is the key to unlock the door.
well done !
That one spoke right to me - thanks. I read the other comments and see that many of us feel that way....a sign of a really good piece of writing.
Heartfelt and humbling
thanks Polly
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I guess if you haven't made contact in a while, you might as well make it a good contact and this was it. Awesome.
Humility goes a long way.
Very beautiful. And the wonderful thing is God is always waiting for us to come back.
Beautiful poem! I have faith in him, so I always come back to him!
lovely H poet,
hopeful h take.
Simple, lovely....
I loved the first verse. It just read perfectly...and from there you took us through an emotional journey in your distinct and wonderful way.
Thank you for sharing your heart and your talent, Miss 5S!
The way you write always speaks directly to my soul.
A+
Polly, what a sweet and meaningful poem! Good writing, my sister!!
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