tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post781426473543796647..comments2023-10-29T04:14:43.466-04:00Comments on The 5th Sister: 16Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-66897417160621851602011-12-06T08:04:14.982-05:002011-12-06T08:04:14.982-05:00Polly! What tremendous work crafting...I loved t...Polly! What tremendous work crafting...I loved this.<br /><br />This was one of those gems that felt like an epic tale...and then you realize how short the word count actually was.<br /><br />Just amazing.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-11323611659311865232011-12-05T17:06:51.745-05:002011-12-05T17:06:51.745-05:00Polly, brava! What an excellent and moving piece!...Polly, brava! What an excellent and moving piece!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-31852696773833079022011-12-05T12:10:59.332-05:002011-12-05T12:10:59.332-05:00So much said in such few words!So much said in such few words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-47091897481344347262011-12-05T12:10:56.561-05:002011-12-05T12:10:56.561-05:00So much said in such few words!So much said in such few words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-80074828636976837842011-12-04T04:17:03.325-05:002011-12-04T04:17:03.325-05:00Such strong images conveyed in these few words.......Such strong images conveyed in these few words....sorry about the loss of your brother at a young age. :(Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-50297417521443933352011-12-04T03:42:03.971-05:002011-12-04T03:42:03.971-05:00Yours is the best so far. Loved it. And sorry abou...Yours is the best so far. Loved it. And sorry about your brother.<br /><br />"/Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-49346783535203592392011-12-04T01:38:10.663-05:002011-12-04T01:38:10.663-05:00Wow, this is wonderful - such strong imagery and e...Wow, this is wonderful - such strong imagery and emotion and within a poem. I'm really impressed. Yours is my favorite.<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-45408776160952488462011-12-03T22:20:44.344-05:002011-12-03T22:20:44.344-05:00great lead in, very sad honest endinggreat lead in, very sad honest endingChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-57132854267784791542011-12-03T20:50:18.274-05:002011-12-03T20:50:18.274-05:00Wow, there's a lot packed in those few words. ...Wow, there's a lot packed in those few words. Powerful.anitamombanitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03705021153044549156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-26489539126613609702011-12-03T18:50:23.245-05:002011-12-03T18:50:23.245-05:00Beautifully done. No prep for the ending, an O Hen...Beautifully done. No prep for the ending, an O Henry touch with the shock.Bookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-63410238260485432622011-12-03T18:35:43.864-05:002011-12-03T18:35:43.864-05:00I agree with Gems. There is great weight in this ...I agree with Gems. There is great weight in this piece and much room for thought. I lost my brother when I was 12. Hugs to you.cj Schlottmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217936774632262633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-60310071104629078382011-12-03T18:34:45.617-05:002011-12-03T18:34:45.617-05:00You were so young to lose a brother. Sad indeed. S...You were so young to lose a brother. Sad indeed. So much said in sixteen words.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-68671809181338788022011-12-03T18:33:39.668-05:002011-12-03T18:33:39.668-05:00only you could convey so much with so few words. ...only you could convey so much with so few words. brilliantly done ...Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270665398498790951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-44340409426434880232011-12-03T17:58:09.785-05:002011-12-03T17:58:09.785-05:00That is a powerful piece as you note the usual and...That is a powerful piece as you note the usual and then beyond imaginable for a 16 year old!Gemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11403950713576686303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-23940854225255606092011-12-03T17:51:23.358-05:002011-12-03T17:51:23.358-05:00wow...def can see that being a tender spot...sorry...wow...def can see that being a tender spot...sorry...and first loves can sting too...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-66015632512592939942011-12-03T17:31:40.076-05:002011-12-03T17:31:40.076-05:00well done and if I interpreted your poem correctly...well done and if I interpreted your poem correctly, sorry about the loss of your brother. When we are that young death seems to have a greater impact on our lives especially when it is someone very close to us.To the Toy Box and Beyondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09664470779483733379noreply@blogger.com