tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post3828543307305281314..comments2023-10-29T04:14:43.466-04:00Comments on The 5th Sister: Hope ChestAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-21624631608216548422012-03-11T10:18:47.802-04:002012-03-11T10:18:47.802-04:00very powerfulvery powerfulChristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-24837681598210429612012-03-10T06:39:53.694-05:002012-03-10T06:39:53.694-05:00hedgewitch said it for me. This is stark, reflecti...hedgewitch said it for me. This is stark, reflective, heartbreaking. Makes me grateful to my mother for leaving my father.....Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-61324716522550875652012-03-10T04:33:12.973-05:002012-03-10T04:33:12.973-05:00Well executed triolet with nicely balanced lines.Well executed triolet with nicely balanced lines.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-91062264823808262292012-03-09T20:47:13.441-05:002012-03-09T20:47:13.441-05:00The form really brings home the loss of innocence ...The form really brings home the loss of innocence and illusions. Powerful write.author.nara.malonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07159847596372441526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-21577371377530046402012-03-09T12:57:17.043-05:002012-03-09T12:57:17.043-05:00Powerful, Polly. And I loved the form.
=)Powerful, Polly. And I loved the form.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-91757491864478733002012-03-09T11:26:37.292-05:002012-03-09T11:26:37.292-05:00You captured the harsh darkness of lost hope...chi...You captured the harsh darkness of lost hope...childhood lost... so very well...nicely done.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-85041498816211883642012-03-09T05:00:16.442-05:002012-03-09T05:00:16.442-05:00A difficult and dark subject handled sensitively y...A difficult and dark subject handled sensitively yet powerfully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-37057011600142163382012-03-09T03:48:01.262-05:002012-03-09T03:48:01.262-05:00This has the feel of a "break up and start ov...This has the feel of a "break up and start over" without being starkly stated. I like the subtlety and musicality of it. Well done.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-69008036638796459602012-03-09T01:54:40.838-05:002012-03-09T01:54:40.838-05:00Very well done. A delicate touch on a tough topic...Very well done. A delicate touch on a tough topic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-35098265290106846132012-03-09T00:45:30.418-05:002012-03-09T00:45:30.418-05:00A hard topic to write about--I've tried. Perha...A hard topic to write about--I've tried. Perhaps form makes it a little easier, but regardless, this is solid, honest and well drawn, and the repeat lines hit a strong note of mournfulness.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-73257335425220902442012-03-09T00:33:46.206-05:002012-03-09T00:33:46.206-05:00the folding and tucking away of childhood dreams h...the folding and tucking away of childhood dreams has just something terribly sad to it...and the repetition makes it hauntingly sad.. well played on the form pollyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-14973758292448277012012-03-08T23:19:57.898-05:002012-03-08T23:19:57.898-05:00Well-balanced triolet, grounded but straying just ...Well-balanced triolet, grounded but straying just north of terrific.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-37328894414727882222012-03-08T22:43:23.228-05:002012-03-08T22:43:23.228-05:00Pollyanna...
Very hard hitting, welcome back
Loved...Pollyanna...<br />Very hard hitting, welcome back<br />Loved your 55 <br />You did fine on Both prompts.<br />Thanks for playing, people worry about you ya know... Have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-88663705567464722022012-03-08T22:25:52.478-05:002012-03-08T22:25:52.478-05:00you slayed this polly...wow, nicely done...well pl...you slayed this polly...wow, nicely done...well played to form...and nice on the story telling in between...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-69895373437302165622012-03-08T21:57:25.986-05:002012-03-08T21:57:25.986-05:00I love the repetition. This reminds me of a villan...I love the repetition. This reminds me of a villanelle. Very nice. It's not easy to write in form.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-7416298913453956762012-03-08T21:51:32.293-05:002012-03-08T21:51:32.293-05:00You've got me feeling around in the back of my...You've got me feeling around in the back of my own head, looking for those dreams I know must have been there, but that I can no longer find.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424347085268921925.post-40023992935859291492012-03-08T21:51:27.139-05:002012-03-08T21:51:27.139-05:00Great writing. It certainly packs a punch with it...Great writing. It certainly packs a punch with it's serious topic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com