Wondering about not making waves is something truly sensational! The sensational haiku is true to its name, indeed!Joy always,Susan
Nicely done, Polly, and so very true.
isn't it sad to be repressed by rules made by others? i agree with you on secrets. the harder you hide them, the faster they get washed up on shore. brilliant haiku!
i tend to be a wave maker...for better or worse...
but isnt jumping around, making waves and geting wet part of the fun of life...spoken like a true wave maker.lol
An excellent haiku. Such depth, with so few words.
Sometimes those secrets can drown us! Nice haiku.Victoria
Well done my friend. I like them both and the second one is oh so true. It never fails. :) Well done :)
Thought you were writing my story there in the first one. :) Love the second too, secrets do have a knack of washing up on shore.
I know of a family that lives like this very sad. Your Haiku was so profound Polly. Have a blessed day.
Nice job Polly.Hope all is well with you and your family.Cheers, jj
I really, really liked this one!
I'm the person who cannon balls into the pool and knocks everyone else around with my waves ;P
Some secrets are like waves of poison... I'd love to hear your story some time. And I wish for you to some day be free from it all.
Drowning in secrets -- what a horrible way to live.
Oh I can relate to this wonderful KU.Melanie
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